[Aliventures newsletter] Is your blog post missing this crucial element?

Published: Thu, 03/03/16

 
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Hello!
I'm going to be away for a few days seeing family, celebrating Kitty's third birthday, and ... best of all ... enjoying a full day of fiction-writing!

(If you happen to be in travelling distance of Oxford and free this Saturday, why not join me? It's a day retreat hosted by the lovely Lorna Fergusson of Fictionfire, 10am - 5pm, and you can find all the details here: fictionfire.co.uk/simply-write-retreats.)

While I'm away, I'll be checking emails occasionally, but please bear with me if I'm a bit slow to get back to you.

As always, don't forget to check out the Aliventures blog too. This week's post went up on Monday:

 
Is Your Blog Post Missing This Crucial Element?
If you blog – whether for pleasure, profit, or a mix of both – then you've probably got a decent handle on blog post structure. You have an introduction to your posts that engages readers, then you get into the main body of what you want to say. 

One crucial part of your structure, though, is really easy to miss. In fact, when I've reviewed blog posts, this has consistently been the most common mistake I see. 

You don't have any sort of conclusion.

Here's what that looks like in practice. Let's say your post is titled "Ten Ways to Fit More Writing Into Your Day". You start off with a few lines introducing the problem that most of your readers face – being busy yet wanting to have more time to write. Then you launch into your list, going from #1 – #10. 

And then you stop, straight after you've finished #10. Because you're done ... right?

I know it often feels that way as the writer: you've said everything you want to say! But to the reader, this can feel like an oddly abrupt ending. It also doesn't give them much idea of what to do next.

This also means you're missing a huge opportunity to nudge your readers towards what you want them to do. Even if you're not blogging in a "pro" way, you'd probably like more comments or feedback. So ask!

A great way to end most posts is with a sentence along these lines:

Which of these will you try this week? Or do you have another great way to squeeze in more writing time? Let us know in the comments.

Some bloggers feel this comes across as a bit needy – like you're begging people to leave a comment. But from your reader's perspective, you're helping them focus and you're giving them an invitation to share their thoughts (which many people need – they won't necessarily think to comment, otherwise).

Quick terminology aside: this type of conclusion is often described as a "call to action" (particularly in copywriting circles) as you're asking the reader to take a specific action.

Of course, inviting comments is far from the only way to end a blog post. You could, instead:
  • Offer further reading suggestions – on your blog or on other people's blogs. Yes, this could end up sending people away from your blog, but it can generate a ton of goodwill from grateful bloggers who you've linked to, and it's genuinely useful for readres.
  • Sum up what you've said – particularly for a long post. Some bloggers even subtitle this section "Conclusion" or "Summing Up" or even a jokey "TL;DR" ("too long, didn't read").
  • Point readers towards one of your books (or services or other products) that's relevant to the post they've just read. This can be a great way to boost sales or get new customers, and it's helpful to readers who may not realise those resources exist.
Or you can do something entirely different! What matters is that you have a conclusion, and that you at least think about what you'd like the reader to do after reading your post.

Next time you read a blog post, check to see whether it has a conclusion. If it does, do you find the conclusion helpful? If it doesn't, how would you have ended it?

I'll be writing about blog post structuring on the Aliventures blog on Monday, so keep an eye out for that post. If you don't already get posts direct to your email inbox and you'd like to, just go to www.aliventures.com and enter your email address in the "Get Blog Updates Straight to Your Inbox" box in the sidebar.
 
Don't Forget to Take the Survey!
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Once I'm back next week (on Tuesday 8th), I'll be closing the survey and going through all the responses. I want to make sure that the content I plan for the blog and newsletter over the next few months fits well with what you want to read!

If you've not had a chance to take part in the survey yet, just head here:


All the questions are optional and most are multiple-choice.

Everyone who takes part (and leaves their email address) will get an exclusive .pdf guide -- like a blog blog post -- that I'll create based on the most popular question / topic that comes up.

If you took part but forgot to leave your email address, just drop me a line (ali@aliventures.com) to let me know and I'll make sure you don't miss out. :-)
 
Next week, I'll be giving you five key rules for titling your blog posts.

Till then, happy writing,

Ali

P.S. Don't forget to check out the blog at www.aliventures.com, especially this week's post, Ten Ways to Enjoy Networking with Other Writers (No Matter How Shy You Are).

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