[Aliventures newsletter] One easy way to get your reader on your character's side – instantly

Published: Fri, 12/16/16

 
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Hello!
How's your writing going? I know this is a manic time of year (and have to confess that my own writing has fallen rather by the wayside...!) If you're having a hectic December and you haven't got the time (or energy, or focus) to write right now, can you plan ahead for a bit of extra writing time in January?

I'm resubscribing to one of my favourite writing magazines, after letting my subscription lapse during a busy 2016 ... and I'm looking forward to returning to short stories for a little while, after eight years (!) focusing on the novel form.
 
One Easy Way to Get Your Reader on Your Character's Side – Instantly 
You've probably come across the fairly well-worn advice to create sympathetic main characters: ones who the reader is quickly inclined to root for. 

One quick way to do that – and this is not the nicest technique ever! – is to make your characters suffer in some way, preferably in the first few pages of your novel.

Here's how to get that right:

DON'T ... let your character whine too much. Yes, they can be scared, upset, miserable ... but be careful not to pile on the angst too much. ("Too much" is relative to your genre. Romance readers might be fine with a pretty heavy dose of main-character angst; thriller readers less so.)

DO ... use suffering to kick-start the plot. For instance, if your character is suffering due to a particular trauma (job loss, bullying, car crash...), this could well give them the story goal of improving things: either changing their life for the better, or returning it to a previous happier state.

DON'T ... pick something arbitrary. There's no point opening your novel with a character painfully stubbing their toe unless this actually has some point. (E.g. the point might be to establish their relationship with another character who's particularly impatient and uncaring.)

DO ... consider indirect suffering, where someone close to your character is hurt or upset. For instance, if they are a parent, perhaps one of their children is in trouble or danger of some sort.

If you want some ideas on types of suffering to use, check out my post 15 Ways to Make Your Characters Suffer (for the Good of Your Novel).

Do you have any questions about writing, or any topics you'd like me to cover in the newsletter or on the blog? Email me at ali@aliventures.com with your suggestions.
 
Next week's newsletter will be a quick pre-Christmas one; if you're already on a break from emails by then, I hope you have a very happy holiday season.

Ali

 
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